[Vwoolf] Leonardo teria aprovado . . .

Stuart N. Clarke stuart.n.clarke at btinternet.com
Tue Sep 17 07:24:08 EDT 2013


If getting up with the hens has nothing to do with social class in Portugal, so be it.  However, it seems to in (parts of?) Spain:

“Phrases from an upper-middle-class, learned and poetic register such as Woolf’s cannot be translated into colloquial expressions from rural non-written varieties of Galician, however common or popular these may be.  Therefore ... ‘But you'll have to be up with the lark’ triggers connotations as to the characters’ social context that are totally different from those conveyed by a phrase like ‘erguese coas galiñas / pitas’.”
Manuela Palacios González, "Some Considerations on the Translation of Virginia Woolf's 'To the Lighthouse' into Galician" in "Some Sundry Wits Gathered Together", ed. S. G. FERNANDEZ-CORUGEDO (Universidade da Coruña: Servicio de Publicacións, 1997), p. 180

My experience in Portugal led me to wish that the cockerels never got up at all, as they seemed to go on crowing all day!

Stuart

From: Erica Mascarenhas 
Sent: Tuesday, September 17, 2013 11:52 AM
To: Stuart N. Clarke 
Cc: vwoolf at lists.service.ohio-state.edu 
Subject: Re: [Vwoolf] Leonardo teria aprovado . . .

Hello everyone, 
I rarely participate in this list but I just had to this time. I have an idea as to why the translation may seem odd to you. As far as I'm aware, "be up with the lark" is an idiom in English. On the other hand, I've never heard it in European Portuguese, with the sole exception of literal translations from English. I assume translators were simply trying to find an equivalent idiom, such as "get up with the hens" (it's got nothing to do with social class, it's simply a reference to the fact that hens get up early in the morning, and you certainly don't need to have hens living in your own backyard to say that). 

Of course, this brings us back to the old question of how idioms should be translated. Should they be translated literally or changed to an idiom that would sound more natural to readers? 



2013/9/1 Stuart N. Clarke <stuart.n.clarke at btinternet.com>


  Oscar Mendes (1960):
  "- Sim, sem dúvida, se for tempo bom amanhã - disse a Sra Ramsay.  Mas você terá de estar de pé com a cotovia - acrescentou."


  Luiza Lobo (1982):
  "É claro que amanhã fará um dia bonito – disse a Sra Ramsay. - Mas vocês terão que madrugar - acrescentou."


  Mário Cláudio (1985):
  "- Sim, é claro, se amanhã estiver bom - disse Mrs Ramsay -, mas vais ter de te levantar com as galinhas - acrescentou."

  Lucília Rodrigues (1992):
  "- Sim, claro, se o tempo amanhã estiver bom - disse Mrs. Ramsay. - Mas vais ter de te levantar bem cedinho - acrescentou."

  I would have thought that the Mendes was the best, but -- 
  “Que scais-je?”

  Stuart




  From: Iara Verocai 
  Sent: Sunday, September 01, 2013 4:23 PM
  To: Stuart N. Clarke ; vwoolf at lists.service.ohio-state.edu 
  Subject: Re: [Vwoolf] Leonardo teria aprovado . . .

  Stuart,

  “Tradutore, traditore”, as the Italiens say. If with difficult in the beginning, it worth running to dictionaries and  grammar books. The rhythm and sonority of Virginia’s prose may be lost, even in the best translation. 



  There are several Portuguese versions of her books, by different translators, from Portugal and Brazil. I guess the lines you quote in your message are from Portugal. I´m far from by books and can’t check it now.



  For me, to translate “up with the lark” and keep the metaphor, it would be better “'mas você vai ter que madrugar”.


  Iara
  From: Stuart N. Clarke 
  Sent: Saturday, August 31, 2013 8:54 AM
  To: vwoolf at lists.service.ohio-state.edu 
  Subject: [Vwoolf] Leonardo teria aprovado . . .


  Pessoalmente, I never believe in reading foreign books in the original language – I lose so much if it’s *not* in translation!  However, for those who can, they should.

  '"Yes, of course, if it's fine tomorrow," said Mrs. Ramsay. "But you'll have to be up with the lark," she added.'

  "- Sim, é claro, se amanhã estiver bon - disse Mrs Ramsay -, mas vais ter de te levantar com as galinhas - acrescentou."
  "Yes, of course, if tomorrow is fine," said Mrs. Ramsay, "but you're going to have to get up with the hens," she added.

  Suddenly, we've slipped down a few social classes!


  I’ve also looked at another couple of Portuguese translations: one said that James would have to be up very early and the other said he'd have to be up with the dawn.  

  It is fascinating the difficulty translators have with "up with the lark" -- of course, it seems so innocuous to us.  It's metaphorical and immediately introduces us to Mrs R's habit of exaggerating.

  Stuart

   

  From: Iara Verocai 
  Sent: Saturday, August 31, 2013 12:38 PM
  To: Stuart N. Clarke ; vwoolf at lists.service.ohio-state.edu 
  Subject: Re: [Vwoolf] Leonard would have approved . . . (2)

  Stuart with his list reminded me that I read Bell´s biography in 1889, in a rather good translation to Portuguese. I´d been reading Virginia since the late sixties: Jacob´s Room and To the Lighthouse bought in Penguin editions. I had been atracted to her by Albee´s play. I read several olhers issued along the seventies and eighties, new Portuguese editions  issued in Brazil. While I read Bell, however, I got convinced that I should keep reading her books in English,  for a new reading after my dicover of how her books were so inspired by her difficult yet enriching life. Also, I began to buy  whatever I found by and about her.  Voyages to Great Britain and the US together with the Internet facilities have made it easy to gather a nice Virginiana. For almost 15 year I´ve been following this list, a quiet common reader learning  about her work from the perspective  and knowledge of list members. Thank you all! 

  Iara

  From: Stuart N. Clarke 
  Sent: Friday, August 30, 2013 4:11 AM
  To: vwoolf at lists.service.ohio-state.edu 
  Subject: [Vwoolf] Leonard would have approved . . . (2)


  Not 100% accurate.  E.g. not listed below: fancy leaving “The Years” (my only prize book from school) in a taxi in North Bondi (Sydney) c. 1 April 1972!  (And why do I know that date?  Because it was about the time I moved flat, and just at the moment I have to supply info. to the UK Pension Service to persuade them to increase my Old Age Pension.  “Tell us the exact period(s) you lived in Australia, Canada or New Zealand from age 16 and your addresses.  If you need more space ...”  I certainly do.)


  VIRGINIA WOOLF BOOKS ACQUIRED, up to July 1978

  (in acquisition date order)



  "The Waves"

  Penguin Books

  1951 (1966 imp.)

  NB:(W279) Penguin Modern Classic 808

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A16e

  OBTAINED:1966.08.19



  "Jacob's Room"

  Penguin Books

  1965

  NB:(W026) Penguin Modern Classic 2259

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A6f

  OBTAINED:1966.09.03



  "The Death of the Moth - and other essays"

  Penguin Books

  1961 (1965 imp.)

  NB:(W500) Penguin Modern Classic 1644   (VWQb) (KpA13)  LuB39

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A27c

  OBTAINED:1966.12.29



  "The Common Reader"

  The Hogarth Press (Uniform Ed)

  1929 ("New Edition")

  NB:(W081)  ffep missing.

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A8c

  OBTAINED:1967.02.04



  "Mrs. Dalloway"

  Penguin Books

  1964 (1967 imp.)

  NB:(W082) Penguin Modern Classic 2159

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A9h

  OBTAINED:1967.04.27



  "A Room of One's Own"

  Harmondsworth, Middx: Penguin Books

  1963 (1967 imp.)

  NB:(W215) Penguin Modern Classic 481

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A12f

  OBTAINED:1968.01.19



  "Orlando: A Biography"

  Penguin Books

  1963 (1967 imp.)

  NB:(W185) Penguin Modern Classic 381

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A11h

  OBTAINED:1968.01.30



  "A Room of One's Own"

  Penguin Books

  1945

  NB:(W215) Vol.481

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A12e

  OBTAINED:1968.05.10



  "The Voyage Out"

  Harcourt, Brace & World, Inc.

  (1968)

  NB:(W213) Harvest Book HB151  Bought in the US

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A1f

  OBTAINED:1969.07.30



  "The Second Common Reader"

  Harcourt, Brace & World, Inc.

  Dec 1966 (1956)

  NB:(W315) Harvest Book HB24  Bought in the US

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A18f

  OBTAINED:1969.07.30



  "Flush"

  Harcourt, Brace & World, Inc.

  (1966)

  NB:(W334) Harbrace Paperback Library HPL12   Bought in the US

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A19e

  OBTAINED:1969.08.13



  "A Writer's Diary - Being Extracts from the Diary of Virginia Woolf"

  The New American Library

  1968

  NB:Signet Classic CY424  LuB59   Bought in the US

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A31bb

  OBTAINED:1969.08.13



  "A Haunted House - and Other Short Stories"

  Harcourt, Brace & World, Inc.

  Aug 1967 (1974)

  NB:(W507) (W001) (W007) (W008) (W017) Harvest Book HB105   (VWQb)  (KpA02) (KpA03)  (W155)  LuB46   Bought in the US

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A28d

  OBTAINED:1969.09.08



  "Three Guineas"

  Harcourt, Brace & World, Inc.

  (1963)

  NB:(W440) Harbinger Book H021   Bought in the US

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A23d

  OBTAINED:1969.09.09



  "Between the Acts"

  The Hogarth Press

  1969 (8th imp.)

  NB:(W488) (VWQb)  LuB37  dj

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A26c

  OBTAINED:1969.10.25



  "Nurse Lugton's Golden Thimble"

  The Hogarth Press

  1966

  NB:  LuB70 dj   Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4C376  NLG

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A38a

  OBTAINED:1969.11.11



  "Night and Day"

  Penguin Books

  1969

  NB:(W214)

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A4e

  OBTAINED:1969.11.27



  "The Moment - and Other Essays"

  The Hogarth Press

  1964 (imp. of 1952 ed.)

  NB:(Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A14) (Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A21) (W245)  LuB52  dj

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A29c

  OBTAINED:1970.04.18



  "The Voyage Out"

  Penguin Books

  1970

  NB:(W213)

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A1g

  OBTAINED:1970.08.07



  "To the Lighthouse"

  Penguin Books

  1964 (1965 imp.)

  NB:(W154) Penguin Modern Classic 2165

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A10f

  OBTAINED:1970.12.31



  "Contemporary Writers"

  The Hogarth Press

  1965

  NB:dj

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A35a

  OBTAINED:1971.10.26



  "Roger Fry:  A Biography"

  The Hogarth Press

  1969, 3rd* imp. (1940)

  NB:(W475) (VWQb)  dj  *Actually 4th

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A25a

  OBTAINED:1971.11.16



  "Granite and Rainbow - Essays"

  The Hogarth Press

  1960 (2nd imp.)

  NB:  LuB63  dj

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A34a

  OBTAINED:1971.11.16



  "Letters"

  The Hogarth Press & Chatto and Windus

  1969, 2nd imp. (1956)

  NB:  LuB61  dj

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A32a

  OBTAINED:1972.05.17



  "Jacob's Room"

  Penguin Books

  1965 (1968 imp.)

  NB:(W026) Penguin Modern Classic 2259

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A6f

  OBTAINED:1972.08.14



  "Virginia Woolf: A Biography - Volume One:  Virginia Stephen 1882-1912"

  The Hogarth Press

  1972

  NB:dj

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4B15a

  OBTAINED:1972.10.12



  "Virginia Woolf: A Biography - Volume Two: Mrs Woolf 1912-1941"

  The Hogarth Press

  1972

  NB:dj

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4B16

  OBTAINED:1972.12.06



  "The Common Reader"

  Harcourt, Brace & World, Inc.

  (1955)

  NB:(W082) Harvest Book HB10

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A8e

  OBTAINED:1973.05.07



  "Mrs Dalloway's Party: A Short Story Sequence"

  The Hogarth Press

  1973

  NB:dj

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A42a

  OBTAINED:1973.08.22



  "Between the Acts"

  Penguin Books

  1953 (1972 imp.)

  NB:(W488) (VWQb)  LuB37

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A26d

  OBTAINED:1973.11.12



  "A Haunted House - and other stories"

  Penguin Books

  1973 (1973 reprint)

  NB:(W507) (W001) (W007) (W008) (W017) (VWQb)  (KpA02) (KpA03)  (W155)  LuB46

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A28e

  OBTAINED:1974.07.23



  "The Flight of the Mind - The Letters of Virginia Woolf, Volume 1: 1888-1912 (Virginia Stephen)"

  The Hogarth Press

  1975

  NB:dj

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A44a

  OBTAINED:1975.10.01



  "Mrs. Dalloway"

  Chatto & Windus (The New Phoenix Library)

  3rd imp., 1950

  NB:(W082)

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A9f

  OBTAINED:1976.06.18



  "Moments of Being: Unpublished Autobiographical Writings"

  The University Press, Sussex

  1976

  NB:dj

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A45a

  OBTAINED:1976.07.22



  "The Question of Things Happening - The Letters of Virginia Woolf, Volume 2:  1912-1922"

  The Hogarth Press

  1976

  NB:dj

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A47a

  OBTAINED:1976.11.22



  "Mrs. Dalloway"

  Random House (The Modern Library, Vol. 217, binding style 8)

  1928 (1939? reprint*)

  NB:(W082) Introduction by Virginia Woolf:  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4B8  *Signed by a previous owner in 1943.  dj not obtained

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A9c

  OBTAINED:1976.12.01



  "The Years"

  The Hogarth Press

  1972, 6th imp. (1940)

  NB:(W423)

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A22c

  OBTAINED:1977.02.08



  "The Waves: The two holograph drafts"

  The Hogarth Press

  1976

  NB:(W279)  dj

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A16h

  OBTAINED:1977.03.11



  "Contemporary Writers"

  Harcourt Brace Jovanovich

  1976

  NB:Harvest Book HB347

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A35c

  OBTAINED:1977.03.26



  "Jacob's Room"

  The Hogarth Press

  1976, 12th imp. (1945)

  NB:(W026)

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A6d

  OBTAINED:1977.05.05



  "A Writer's Diary - Being Extracts from the Diary of Virginia Woolf"

  The Hogarth Press

  1975, 7th imp. (1954)

  NB:  LuB59  dj

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A31a

  OBTAINED:1977.05.05



  Freshwater:  A Comedy"

  The Hogarth Press

  1976

  NB:dj

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A46b

  OBTAINED:1977.05.05



  "The Voyage Out"

  The Hogarth Press

  1975, 10th imp. (1929)

  NB:(W213)

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A1e

  OBTAINED:1977.05.09



  "Night and Day"

  The Hogarth Press

  1971 (9th imp.)

  NB:(W214)

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A4c

  OBTAINED:1977.05.09



  "To the Lighthouse"

  The Hogarth Press

  1974 (Uniform ed., 1930)

  NB:(W154) dj - inside front flap: blurb same as on previous (1967) reprint

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A10c

  OBTAINED:1977.05.09



  "A Room of One's Own"

  The Hogarth Press (Uniform Edition)

  1930 (15th imp. 1974)

  NB:(W215)  dj

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A12d

  OBTAINED:1977.05.09



  "A Haunted House - and Other Short Stories"

  The Hogarth Press

  (1953) 1973 imp.

  NB:(W507) (W001) (W007) (W008) (W017) VWQb  (KpA02) (KpA03)  (W155)  LuB46  dj

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A28c

  OBTAINED:1977.05.09



  "The Waves"

  The Hogarth Press

  '12th imp. 1976' (1943)

  NB:(W279)  dj

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A16d

  OBTAINED:1977.05.16



  "A Writer's Diary - Being Extracts from the Diary of Virginia Woolf"

  Harcourt Brace Jovanovich, Inc.

  (1973)

  NB:Harvest Book HB264  LuB59

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A31c

  OBTAINED:1977.05.21



  "The Years"

  Harcourt, Brace & World, Inc.

  (1969)

  NB:(W423) Harvest Book HB166

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A22g

  OBTAINED:1977.05.23



  "Between the Acts"

  Harcourt Brace Jovanovich, Inc.

  (1970)

  NB:(W488) Harvest Book HB189   (VWQb)  LuB37

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A26f

  OBTAINED:1977.05.23



  "Granite and Rainbow - Essays"

  Harcourt Brace Jovanovich

  1975

  NB:Harvest Book HB318  LuB63

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A34c

  OBTAINED:1977.05.23



  "Life As We Have Known It by Co-operative Working Women"

  Virago

  1977 (1st ed. 1931)

  NB:(W250) Virago Reprint Library No.1   Cited in TGU TGU: n. 13 to ch. 3

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4B11a

  OBTAINED:1977.06.06



  "The Captain's Death Bed - and Other Essays"

  Harcourt Brace Jovanovich, Inc.

  (1973)

  NB:(W054) Harvest Book HB253  LuB56

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A30d

  OBTAINED:1977.06.15



  "Orlando:  A Biography"

  Triad Panther

  1977

  NB:(W185)

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A11k

  OBTAINED:1977.08.23



  "A Room of One's Own"

  Triad Panther

  1977

  NB:(W215)

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A12h

  OBTAINED:1977.08.23



  "The Years"

  Triad Panther

  1977

  NB:(W423)   2 copies

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A22h

  OBTAINED:1977.08.23



  "To the Lighthouse"

  J.M. Dent & Sons Ltd

  1977 (imp. of 1938 ed.)

  NB:(W154) No. 1949 [paperback] of Everyman's Library

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A10d

  OBTAINED:1977.11.28



  "Three Guineas"

  The Hogarth Press

  1977, 6th imp. (1943; 1938)

  NB:(W440)

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A23c

  OBTAINED:1977.11.28



  "Collected Essays - Volume One"

  The Hogarth Press

  1968 (2nd imp.)

  NB:(W054)  LuB69  dj

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A37a

  OBTAINED:1977.11.28



  "The Diary of Virginia Woolf, Volume 1: 1915-1919"

  The Hogarth Press

  1977

  NB:dj

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A48a

  OBTAINED:1977.11.28



  "Books and Portraits: Some further selections from the Literary and Biographical writings of Virginia Woolf"

  The Hogarth Press

  1977

  NB:(KpB06)  dj

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A49a

  OBTAINED:1977.11.28



  "Jacob's Room"

  Triad Panther

  1976

  NB:(W026)

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A6g

  OBTAINED:1977.11.29



  "Mrs. Dalloway"

  Triad Panther

  1976

  NB:(W082)

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A9k

  OBTAINED:1977.11.29



  Virginia Woolf: A Biography - Volume One: Virginia Stephen 1882-1912"

  Triad Paladin

  1976

  NB:(H)

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4B15a

  OBTAINED:1977.11.29



  Virginia Woolf: A Biography - Volume Two: Mrs Woolf 1912-1941"

  Triad Paladin

  1976

  NB:(H)

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4B16

  OBTAINED:1977.11.29



  "A Cockney's Farming Experiences"

  San Diego State University Press

  1972

  NB:Copy 703 of 2000

  Kirkpatrick Bibliog:Kp4A41a

  OBTAINED:1977.12.14




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