[Vwoolf] Improving a draft

[Stuart N. Clarke]

DRAFT:    With their grotesque characters and constant allusions to bodily functions, the ‘Carry On’ films are remote from the spirit of Ealing comedies.

CUP: Posh it up, would you, darling -- OK?

FINAL: With their grotesque characters and constant allusions to bodily functions, the ‘Carry On’ films would seem to be far closer to Bakhtin’s carnival spirit than are the Ealing comedies.


Stuart
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